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题目:
Parents should encourage children spend less time in studying and more in doing physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
范文:
Academic pressure has occupied the majority time of students, particularly teenagers in my country where education has higher priority than other domestic issues for most family. Some feel that parents should encourage their young offspring reallocate some time from learning to physical exercises for both their short and long term benefits, and this is also my position.
Regular sports activities indeed promote youngsters’ physical and mental well-being. Routinely workout can do the body good, as is known to all, and growing evidence show it also helping maintain optimum status of brain. Also, the movement of muscles contract and relax during sports so that the tensive parts of young brains can be absent temporarily and get total relaxation, which decrease stress effectively compared with leisure activities like watching TV and reading for fun. As well as that, exercising releases some chemicals in brain, which help lift the mood, so depression, becoming more common among young people, can be prevented or conquered.
However, this idea can easily draw counter views. Some parents would doubt whether this part of precious time is worthy of sacrifice which their children would make use of to improve grades and surpass their peers. What is more, parental consent on certain periods for sports may give some young escapists an indication that education finally gives way to other issues. That wrong message is so appealing for adolescents that they may easily compromise with laziness, a part of human nature. However, these worries and risks are overshadowed by its aforementioned rewards. Especially, in my country, where children's learning pattern has long been criticized for too much sacrifice of their physical and psychological well-being.
In conclusion, despite the academic concerns held by parents, physical activities generally are beneficial to the development of children, both physically and mentally, in the long run.