小作文得分3要素:信息全,逻辑连,语言变。其中逻辑的连接相对比较抽象,“貌似”难以驾驭,其实只要思路清晰,顺利展开小作文是非常容易的一件事情。下面就以OG Test8柱状图为例,给压压们展示逻辑链接和伴随状态的应用。
The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.
The bar chart illustrates the annual alteration of numbers in renting or selling different kinds of films during the period 2002 to 2010.
We can see that in 2002 most people preferred to watch movies by renting from a store, with 18,000, but it began to decline stably throughout the given 10 years. On the other hand, starting from 8,000(much less than that for rentals), films of VHS also showed a steady decreasing trend, but it disappeared in 2006. By contrast, blue-ray, as a new form of watching movies, began to appear in the market, however, only with a small-amount sale even in a slight increase.
However, DVD was different from other three formats, with a dramatic growth during the first 3 years (overtaking that of VHS in 2003) and a slowed-down development in the following 4 years, reaching its highest at 21,000. From then on, the figure kept reducing slowly, ending up with 18,000.
可以说,写作的逻辑就是简单的东西灵活地应用。鸭鸭们可以在所有满分范文中,画出表示逻辑连接的词或短语。大量整理之后,逻辑问题就再也不是问题。不信,你们试试!
作者简介:
陈思佳老师
陈思佳:吉林新东方国外部写作组教研负责人,雅思写作教龄3.5年。擅长分析解读官方材料、挖掘知识落地方法、诊断学生问题和提出解决办法。
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