【科技类】
Now children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time doing sports, why is this? Do you think it is a negative or positive development? 现在,孩子花费很多时间在电脑游戏上而不是做运动?为什么,你认为是积极的还是消极的?(2015年3月31日)
【写作点评】
雅思写作有四种经典提问角度:利弊讨论、分析问题解决问题、两种观点讨论、是否同意一种观点。2016年3月31日雅思写作为综合提问,任务指令要求先分析原因,再利弊讨论。
【小鹏哥3月31日雅思写作预测回顾】
【科技类】
A study shows that a lot of children, from the age 7 to 11, spend too much time watching television or playing video games. How do you think this problem influence the children, their families and the society? What measures should be taken to solve it ? 研究显示,7 岁到 11 岁的年轻人花费太多时间看电视,玩游戏,这对于孩子,家庭和社会的影响何在? 应该如何解决?
【头脑风暴】
① 笑笑三岁,三岁的笑笑特别喜欢玩I-pad的街机三国游戏,他知道张飞、关羽、赵云、李典、肥肥等人物。游戏给他带来感官快乐的同时,也危害到他的健康。因此,爸爸会严格控制他的游戏时间,我更喜欢带着他登玉皇山。
② 我们已从互联网时代进入到无线互联网时代。手机游戏或者电脑游戏成为年轻人放松娱乐的重要方式之一。游戏是一把双刃刀,对于玩家而言,在放松消遣的同时,也耽误了宝贵的时间,影响了学习和工作。
【思路拓展】
鼓励孩子们玩游戏的利好:
① 丰富多彩的游戏节目成为很多学生缓解压力,释放情绪的一种有效方式。设想,孩子们在校努力学习,课后读补习班,作业繁重,鲜有大量的时间休闲娱乐,玩游戏可令学生们暂时忘记现实生活中的烦恼和压力。
② 一些竞技类的游戏其实是锻炼玩家的反应能力和布局能力的,因此,学生玩家也会培养多方面能力,例如手眼并用,危机处理,团队协作等。
③ 有些游戏的设计,以学习为导向,寓教于乐,让玩家在娱乐中学习知识,这也可以提高他们的学习效率,激发他们的学习热情。
鼓励孩子们玩游戏的弊端:
① 学生们的主要任务是学习知识,考虑到孩子们的自律性较差,允许孩子们玩优秀容易使他们分散精力,耽误学习。
② 过度沉迷游戏有害健康,具体而言,玩家会视力下降,养成懒惰和久坐的生活习惯,不愿从事户外运动,因而导致肥胖。然而,户外运动是更好的方式放松身心,提高学习效率。
③ 少儿不宜的游戏内容是精神鸦片。暴力,色情,血腥的信息,对于成长中的年轻人而言,毒害其心灵,误导人生观,诱发暴力冲动,导致校园欺凌或少年犯罪的上升,可能会危害社会。
【范文赏析】
【首段】 背景介绍 + 写作目的
Computer games like many other prevailing entertaining activities are look down upon by many parents as time-wasters. However, it is true that video games have been exerting a peculiar fascination on a great many people young players. Perhaps that is why many teenagers prefer to play on-line games rather than embark on physical exercises in their spare time. This essay aims to explore the reasons why on-line games have such charm on the young and discuss the pros and cons of computer games.
【二段】 电脑游戏流行的原因
The reasons why on-line games enjoy tremendous popularity are manifold. The most essential reason why numerous children are keen on playing computer games is that many games are well-designed, in other words, many games are characteristic of melodious music, stunning plots and vivid pictures, thereby, teenage players are easily attracted. Another reason is that many children are eager to relax for a while via playing their favorite games, especially when they are burdened with academic study.
【三段】电脑游戏对少年玩家的利好
Seen from the positive aspects, children can become the beneficiaries of computer games if they can play them in a proper way. First, some mental techniques trained by video games include: quick reaction, teamwork strategy, crisis-solving abilities, hand-eye coordination and so on. This kind of goal-driving experience will influence the players’ future life positively. Also, proper game time can, to some extent, help teenagers reduce pressure. Imaginably, the study efficiency can be improved if one can vent his or her negative emotions. Last, some learning-oriented games can still facilitate students’ study, it is a good thing if players can acquire knowledge in a relaxing way.
【四段】电脑游戏对少年玩家的弊端
Sure enough, some problems invariably ensue if children excessively indulge in the computer games. First, violent video games are always blamed by the media as the reason why some teenage players become aggressive and even conduct some anti-social offenses. Also, the craziness about games is physically detrimental because players tend to reduce physical activities, thus, the sedentary lifestyle would increase the likelihood of obesity. Last, many parents are worried that the study will be delayed. The sole task of students is to update their knowledge. Youngsters will regret it for the rest of their lives provided that they fail to draw on their precious youth.
【尾段】亮明观点
In closing,whether the impacts that computer games exert on players are positive or negative largely depends on how students treat games. There are many benefits for people to play video games, as for children, they should control the time,excessive indulgence is unwise.
【经典语料】
1. Video games have been exerting a peculiar fascination on a great many people young player. 一直以来,电子游戏都对年轻的玩家极有吸引力。
2. Some problems invariably ensue 一些问题随之而来
3. conduct some anti-social offenses 做出一些反社会行为
4. The study will be delayed 学习会被耽误
5. This kind of goal-driving experience will influence the players’ future life positively. 以目标为驱动的经历会在未来对玩家产生积极的影响。
6. The study efficiency can be improved if one can vent his or her negative emotions. 如果一个人可以释放其不良情绪,学习效率也会提高。
7. Some learning-oriented games can still facilitate students’ study 一些以学习为导向的游戏也会辅助学业。
8. Whether the impacts that computer games exert on players are positive or negative largely depends on how students treat games. 玩游戏的影响是积极还是消极,很大程度上取决于玩家对待它们的方式。
9. spend great amounts of time in playing computer games 花费大量的时间玩游戏
10. spend a great deal of time on playing on-line games花费大量的时间玩游戏
11. Virtually, children can become the beneficiaries of on-line games 实际上,孩子们可以成为在线游戏的受益者
12. However, on the downsides, …… will have a really adverse impact on sb 然而,从消极的角度看,…… 将会对某人施加不良的影响
13. Also, …… is physically detrimental ……是有害健康的
14. Last,students usually have a hard time in zeroing in on study if they indulge in computer games 如果学生沉迷游戏,他们很难专注于学习。
15. Seen from the perspective of health,excessive game time is health-threatening 从健康角度而言,长时间玩游戏有害健康。
【作者介绍】
薛鹏(雅思小鹏哥),新东方网专栏作家,长春市作家协会会员。高中时代出版诗文集《选择坚强》,每年创作20万字原创语料库以及范文。吉林大学外国语言学及应用语言学硕士。17年英语教学经验 (7年新东方雅思托福SAT教学经历),前长春新东方功勋教师,多次培训出雅思和托福高分学员(雅思写作8.0分,托福写作29分)。
爱生活,爱运动,爱音乐电影,爱旅行美食,爱读书摄影,更爱英语教学。20岁登上英语讲台,主讲英语万词速记课程。熟悉GRE、TOEFL、SAT、TEM、CET等各级别词汇教学。
大一时即在报刊杂志上主持“英语学习系列谈”以及“薛鹏教你学单词”等专栏。2006年获得“外研社/朗文杯”新概念背诵大赛吉林省赛区大学成人组冠军,全国总决赛大学成人组二等奖。
对于各类写作课程有精深研究,授课方式行云流水,妙语连珠,知识底蕴深厚,对学员极具有启迪性和激励性。
教学理念:Education is not the filling of a pail but the lighting of a fire.(教育不是注满一桶水,而是点燃一把火)
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